Sunday, August 28, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday


Good morning class. Today’s six sentences come from a fight scene between Hell Kat and her brother Tyler. Shooter is not happy to see Tyler fighting a girl and bare knuckle hits him in the face. Hell Kat is pissed that anyone, other than herself, would hit her beloved brother. Don’t worry, she doesn’t kill Shooter, even if she wants to.



“You’re lucky you’re balls don’t resemble cooked oatmeal. You pull that shit again and I will personally hang you from the ceiling and beat you till you bleed to death on my kitchen floor. Feel me?”

The rest of my Marines watched me leave the gym. As I walked out the door I heard Horndog say, “That is the baddest ass chick I’ve ever met.” And then I heard the slap of fist hitting face.



Stop by my friend’s place for more Six Sentence Sunday.
Six Sentence Sunday-ers
Posted by Katie Harper at 8:00 AM

18 comments:

  1. Muffy WilsonAugust 28, 2011 at 8:26 AM

    Oatmeal balls?? She scared the oatmeal outta me!!! Very good 6:) xo

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  2. Lisa WorrallAugust 28, 2011 at 10:06 AM

    Love, love, love !

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  3. An Open BookAugust 28, 2011 at 10:25 AM

    WOW- what a cliff hanger- can't wait to read more- great 6
    Dawne P

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  4. Angela S. StoneAugust 28, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Oh!What a cliffie!! Great six! *G*!

    xx
    A.

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  5. Bonni SansomAugust 28, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    Oatmeal balls? OUCH! Love the six Katie!

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  6. AnonymousAugust 28, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    I loved the oatmeal balls, too! Great six! So intense!!! xo

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  7. Kelly's MomAugust 28, 2011 at 1:56 PM

    Bad a%# indeed! Awesome 6!

    Amy Durham

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  8. Benjamin T. RussellAugust 28, 2011 at 5:43 PM

    Come on, "Bad Ass Chick"? Are you sure he didn't use the "B" word? BTW; haven't I asked you before to stop making references to doing bodily harm to a man's balls? Crap - just shoot him instead

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  9. Katie HarperAugust 28, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    Ben, do you have any idea how much damage a bare knuckle hit thrown by someone who knows how can do? Trust me, Shooter got off easy.

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  10. Carrie Ann RyanAugust 28, 2011 at 6:10 PM

    Cooked oatmeal? Hmm.... Nice six.

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  11. Kharisma RhayneAugust 28, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    Brilliant SSS

    ((and a bare knuckle hit from someone that can throw it can do a lot of damage--coming from a retired professional fighter ;0))

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  12. Katie HarperAugust 28, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    Kharisma you are my kinda girl.

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  13. AlixAugust 28, 2011 at 7:16 PM

    Fantastic six!! Well done

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  14. UnknownAugust 29, 2011 at 1:53 AM

    WHOA!!! Intense!

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  15. LauraAugust 29, 2011 at 2:38 AM

    Kicking ass, love it!

    Laura

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  16. UnknownAugust 29, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    The wording in your dialogue is so great. I love continuing to read this story about Hell Cat.

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  17. PiperAugust 29, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    I adore strong women and yours rocks. Great six!

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  18. 1000th.monkeyAugust 29, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    ...should be 'your balls' not 'you're balls'.

    Nice dialogue!! Felt very natural and very convincing ;)

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