Sunday, October 2, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

From Never Say Just. Hell Kat does not have a very high opinion of herself in this scene.



I screwed everything up. For one thing instead of saying “hey”, I should have said, “I love you. Can I have your babies?” But why would he want to have kids with me? I'm a horrible breeding partner. I’m mentally unstable and emotionally retarded. If I lived in the animal kingdom, I would be killed for the benefit of the species.

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Six Sentence Sunday



11 comments:

  1. Think before you speak...sigh, we've all been there

    Dawne P

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  2. Really loved this. So refreshing, and a great peek into a very human emotion.

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  3. Very realistic. I can't tell you how many times I thought the very same thing. She hard but she's human. I love it!

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  4. Oh God...Kat just had her "I carried a watermelon" moment! Love it!

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  5. you write amazing characters Katie--we we all be able to someday say "I knew her when..."
    Liz

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  6. Love love LOVE this. Excellent job! I'm loving me some Hell Kat.

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  7. Nice emotion from Hell Kat. I love this post, Katie! Great six!

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  8. Awww... Poor thing! I'm sure she's not that bad. Great show of her low self esteem with her dialogue!!

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  9. I hope someone proves her wrong! Great six!

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