Sunday, October 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

SURPRISE!! Today's snippet comes from my WIP, Never Say Goodbye. It will be a sequel to Never Say Just. Yvette is in love with Doc. She thinks Doc doesn't love her. Sad.

Every grown woman has a six year old living inside her that comes out to play when the woman gets her feelings hurt. Sometimes that six year old has a lighter and a gallon of gasoline and sets fire to the offender’s car. But today, she wasn’t going to do anything that extreme. She’s just going to pout. I really hope she can keep my inner slut under control so I don’t walk into Doc’s room wearing nothing but a smile and pair of Jimmy Choos.

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12 comments:

  1. Aw, go on, walk right in there and blow his mind! Great six!

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  2. Whew! What a mental image! I love your writing style!

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  3. Perfect explanation of a woman hurt. Walk in there girlie. Doc is hot!

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  4. LOVE this one Katie- the humor and the truth behind the gasoline *cough* never ever had thought of that one- lol


    Dawne P

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  5. Yes, such a look into the mind of a woman. Love the internal conflict! :)

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  6. Can't do it without the Jimmy Choo's. :-D. Great six that I really enjoyed!

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  7. Yes, there is a very thin line between a bon fire and a pair of Jimmy Choos. It's true that women are the Universe's gift to creation, but damn it, do they all have to be so freaking nuts??

    Nice SS Ms. Katie - it gave me chills

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  8. Personally, I'd love to see the fire and gasoline combo ;)

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