Friday, November 11, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday

It’s that time again Harperites. What does this photo say to you?




A fist flew through the air landing on Lance’s jaw. Lance kicked Jake in the stomach knocking him to the ground. Lance pressed his foot into Jake’s throat and said, “Which one? Which one of them did you take?”

Jake twisted Lance’s foot giving him just the opening he needed to roll out from underneath him. Jumping up, he drilled his foot into his best friend’s liver. Lance ignored the spear of pain shooting through his back. He twisted Jake around holding him skin close against his chest. Curling his fingers into Jake’s chest Lance whispered, “Touch one of my whores again, and I’ll rip your still beating heart from your chest and cram it down your throat.”


This was a bit sinister, but my friends might find it a bit more....
sensual.
Check out what they have to say.
Flash Fiction Friday
Posted by Katie Harper at 6:00 AM

15 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 11, 2011 at 6:18 AM

    Wow. What an impact!

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  2. LindseyNovember 11, 2011 at 6:42 AM

    Nothing wrong with making sure a friend gets reminded what's yours, not his. Great post.

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  3. LunaEllaAldoraNovember 11, 2011 at 6:42 AM

    Damn, OUCH! Has he learned his lesson?

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  4. Erika BadassNovember 11, 2011 at 6:49 AM

    Hm this one sure has my mind turning in about a hundred different directions Katie! I love that!

    Thanks!

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  5. Bonni S.November 11, 2011 at 6:55 AM

    Wow what a violent vision of the pic. I would hate to piss him off. But then again I wouldn't mess with his whores. Excellent post Katie!

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  6. JadeNovember 11, 2011 at 6:58 AM

    wow!! rough! but great none the less
    Love it

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  7. AnonymousNovember 11, 2011 at 7:15 AM

    Leave those whores alone! But, they're whores... after all.... maybe he's not the cause of their unfaithfulness... great post Katie

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  8. Benjamin T. RussellNovember 11, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    Kate, nice fight scene - I'm just surprised that you didn't have someone getting kicked in the nuts. We both know that you have this thing for nuts. Great FFF post.

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  9. Katie HarperNovember 11, 2011 at 7:25 AM

    Benjamin I know how sensitive you are about men getting kicked in the nuts, but for the life of me I don't understand why. I kept it a clean fight just for you my dear.

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  10. Sherri HayesNovember 11, 2011 at 7:33 AM

    Wow. I wasn't anticipating a fight scene with this picture. Interesting take Katie. :)

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  11. Gemma ParkesNovember 11, 2011 at 4:31 PM

    Great take on the picture Katie, really descriptive!

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  12. VenusBookluvrNovember 11, 2011 at 5:20 PM

    Wow that packed a punch!!

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  13. HavanNovember 11, 2011 at 8:35 PM

    So much action in so few words! Very nicely done!

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  14. Author Cyril J. MichaelNovember 12, 2011 at 3:10 PM

    Two sweaty men -- fantastic FFF!

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  15. Davee JonesNovember 12, 2011 at 7:57 PM

    I like it and believe he got his point across. Very nice description of their altercation.

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